•Friday, June 12, 2009
Below is my entry for the " Summer Heat " Contest at Bloggeratti. Check out the below link and let me know what you think :)
Summer Nights
Summer Nights
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बूढ़े मां बाप
1 month ago
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12 Spin Offs:
it was beautiful and i am waiting for the party after u have won the competition :)...and u expressed the feeling of being married and the love they showed each other...wonderful way to go adisha :)..
urs..hemu..
@ Hemanth - Awww, thank you so much ... :) Just glad you enjoyed it !
I could so put myself in the protagonist's shoes. It's a mix of worried and happy :) I guess this is how married life begins :) A great write Adisha. Makes me want to know what happens next!
i wanna get married now :)
i found a love though :P
it's a very nice story, i'm sure u'll make it to the top. best of luck, for it. generally i don't like romantic stories about married couples, but strangely this one was quite impressive.
Beautiful! as good a romantic narration as any!
@ Stillness - hehehe. Yup, that's how they all begin... Those first few months ... hehehe ... Will try to follow it up with something else you might like :D
@ Chriz - You should get married Now at least ...
@ Saurabh - Thanks for the show of faith ... Keep visiting ...
@ Darklordreturns - Thank you. Hope to see more of you here ...
ah! am quite late in commenting here.. was a little occupied with stdies n stuff.. read it long time back that time server wasnt quite on my side :)
well well narrated n gelled with the theme.. could get a picture clear out of ur narration.. i actually giggled to know u cried for such thing... its like a small baby standing out-side a mall n crying for the candy there in the shop... hee hee... sumtimes such small small demands makes ppl so adorable! ;)
congrats on winning this contest.Well done!!!